Originally Posted by
livedarklions
Well, when I first responded this was in general cycling, but only about half of your post has anything to do with the bike, the rest is about Lawton, dead animals, bumps, headphones, police and a bunch of other stuff. I had no idea we were supposed to be focusing on some bike adaptations. Also, the photo wasn't attached to the OP when I responded.
Looks swell. Mazel tov.
Please learn to write. Paragraph breaks and topic sentences might be a good place to start.