Don't give up your day job.
Sorry to be negative, but the result of your work looks amateurish, poorly planned and unfinished. That said, no one expects perfection from a novice. If it is in you to keep at it, do so and your skill level will increase. Be prepared to make a mistake or two, as you learn. My guess is that Drillium Dude did not get it perfect, the first time out of the gate, either.
I have built lots of bikes, and not all of them turned out perfect. Even today, after hundreds of builds, I still goof, now and again.
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"98% of the bikes I buy are projects".