Apparently my addition to this thread got lost in the electronic universe. i said something like, "That is not writing, that is a quote from the victim's wife."
The bad writing would be the incomplete sentences, the awkward sentences ... but as I also said ... You read the article. You are an intelligent person. You can recognize bad writing. So I am not sure what you are not getting ... or choosing not to "get," because you are well able to "get" whatever you want ... you are smart enough to understand about anything said on this forum or in most news reports written in English ... so I cannot take you post seriously.
Be well and do good.