Pros:
Its short, hurrah!
Video quality
Audio quality
Good editing
Cons:
Subject and details
32 Reasons? Can anybody remember that many?
Anyway, try 4, or 6 or 8 or 10 at the very most. Instead of more volume, give more details. Give us the reason why commuting is best, then expand on that reason. If its cheaper than the bus tell us how. If its faster than driving show us how: Short cuts? Traffic? Consider the title, 4 Reasons BC is the Best (or better than driving) in 4 minutes.