575 @ f4.5 - The Haiku and Photography Thread
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In search of a trail,
Deadfall presents a challenge.
Rewards lay ahead.
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One more needs my hand
To reach old roads of our land
Adds youth to this man
To reach old roads of our land
Adds youth to this man
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I've never done a haiku before but had a puncture at this exact spot and thought I'd take the opportunity to give it a go....
Streets strewn with broken glass brings rides to a temporary stop
You'll see so much more if you pause, look around and up
And what was half empty becomes a now half full cup
Streets strewn with broken glass brings rides to a temporary stop
You'll see so much more if you pause, look around and up
And what was half empty becomes a now half full cup
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I've never done a haiku before but had a puncture at this exact spot and thought I'd take the opportunity to give it a go....
Streets strewn with broken glass brings rides to a temporary stop
You'll see so much more if you pause, look around and up
And what was half empty becomes a now half full cup
Streets strewn with broken glass brings rides to a temporary stop
You'll see so much more if you pause, look around and up
And what was half empty becomes a now half full cup
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Thanks and yes I didn't get the 575 thing right there did I. And I know they mostly don't rhyme, but they please my simple mind more when they do. OK I'll have another bash.....
Concrete jungle more grey than green
Yearning for countryside scenes with burbling streams
Painted jungle can still be serene
Still not quite 575, I'll maybe get there eventually.
Concrete jungle more grey than green
Yearning for countryside scenes with burbling streams
Painted jungle can still be serene
Still not quite 575, I'll maybe get there eventually.
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Third time lucky...
Middle aged peepers with myopia
Middle aged knees and a suspected hernia
Must pedal until beyond dystopia
Middle aged peepers with myopia
Middle aged knees and a suspected hernia
Must pedal until beyond dystopia
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Aha! I see what we’re missing: it’s syllable-count, not word-count that makes Haiku unique. But still lovely poems and photos.
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Merriam Webster's definition of haiku: An unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively.
I actually learned about haiku from a girlfriend, while I was stationed in Iwakuni, Japan. Not poetry as we understand it, it is more contemplative; something to meditate on. The discipline of staying with the pattern causes you to expand your vocabulary, to find words that fit both the definition you are looking for, and the syllable count you need to complete the puzzle. I find it nice to practice on long solo rides.,
.found a place to rest
here along the river trail
shade is a blessing
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Odd, every other source I find defines haiku as poetry - I certainly would define it as such. To me, poetry is the concentration or better yet distillation of words to paint images in the mind. I would agree that haiku is like a puzzle.
Of interest, haiku was created out of renga, a collaborative poetry session - it was the first stanza. We are far from the conventions of renga, but this collaborative group effort seems to be in the spirit of renga.
Of interest, haiku was created out of renga, a collaborative poetry session - it was the first stanza. We are far from the conventions of renga, but this collaborative group effort seems to be in the spirit of renga.
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Old sad Wrights saddle
in search of more travel miles
fragile worn leather
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in search of more travel miles
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Pedal for hours,
No cars yet to mar the peace;
Going to the Sun.
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old man in a hat
riding on a cloudy day
my brother-in-law
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chili-cheese omelet
waiting for me to devour
while bike waits outside
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Fat, carbohydrates;
I’m not really a glutton,
I’m just refueling.
I’m not really a glutton,
I’m just refueling.
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same brother-in-law
in brilliant color this time
see the shadow-play?
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a gondola here?
Stillwater is not Venice
maybe they are lost
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Gravel action shot,
Inelegant framing job.
Abandoned rail line.
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I did not need you.
I have one very much like you.
But how could I resist you?
I have one very much like you.
But how could I resist you?
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What's not to love? With chrome!
And low gears, to boot!
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Your place is so far
The clouds are yet darkening
Shall I drink raindrops?
Brent
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