dhender02

Here's the first short episode, I mean VERY short about 30 seconds of dialogue, of a cycling animation series I created... Check it out... Let me know what you think...

https://vimeo.com/153715158

ypsetihw

neat . . .

dhender02

Thanks!!!

ypsetihw

it looks like it's about to get funny, I'd love to hear the dialogue about mr VP racer noob

brawlo

Should have called him Fred

dhender02

Ahh you saw that, Frank is Fred... I thought calling him Fred was too obvious.... LOL!!! You made my day!!!!

dhender02

Yeah, pretty good exchanges between Jack (older guy) and Mr. VP Racer noob in upcoming episodes. I think they're funny... but there's a line in Prince's Purple Rain the movie, whereas the club owner tells Prince nobody is diggin his music but himself.... hopefully this isn't the case with my animation... Thanks for your comments!!

Black wallnut 

You are asking for feedback so here goes...... I'm not keen on the bobble head motion when talking. I'm sure animation software is not cheap so you might be limited.... I do like the story line so far.

dhender02

Thanks for the input!! My buddy & I went back and forth on the bobble motion... Since the clips are so short, ~15-20 seconds, I thought it would add a little "flavor" to it... After the first episode it's not so annoying or I've just gotten use to it after seeing it so much....LOL!! Thanks!!

dagray

cool

dhender02

Thanks!!

RubeRad

can't wait to see more...

dhender02

Thanks RubeRad!! BTW, I just posted the second episode in a new thread... BTW, you can either like the facebook page (facebook.com/gamedaymetric) to get notified of a new episode, or subscribe to the gameday metric blog, at gamedaymetric.com to get an email when a new episode is published...

Erwin8r

Cool. Way too short.

dhender02

Thanks Erwin8r!!! Trying to appeal to the "Vine" generation that want it in 6 seconds or less, I was afraid they were too long...

dhender02

Thanks Fat2Cat!!! I went back and forth on the bobblehead choice, glad you like it!!